Thursday, August 30, 2012

Waves ripple

The sea once tries to tell the waves, story of the water playing dead in the river. But the waves know better. The river has its water living life differently. Waves bubble. River has its ripples.  Foam is the afterthought. The ripple probably is the wrikle on the forehead for the river as it tries to share a tale

1 comments:

sid said...

nice to see your writing after a long time. Just a suggestion that a contrast between river and sea would have been more nice rather than a wave and river. Exactly the same beautiful metaphors as you wrote but different speakers. Just a suggestion :)