Thursday, April 17, 2008

Eye for an eye makes the whole world blind..

the silence in me gives you peace
the war I wage against me
Shuts the door to your enemy

4 comments:

Saibal Barman said...

Superb expressions conveyed in just three lines.....
"In my silence flourishes your peace;
My battles within turn your enemies defenceless.
While your victory is evinced through eloquent speeches;
Those white flags of peace fail to wipe
Endless oozing from countless wounds it has borne along with."

It has its finest effect in the reader's own way....
I salute you, madam !

Jui Chitre Deshmukh said...

thanks saibal..:)

Anonymous said...

nice work...am one of the regulars on your blog now :)

Jui Chitre Deshmukh said...

hey thanks arnab.. now i will blog more regularly..:)