Who am I?
Am I the red seashell?
Am I playing dead?
Lying on the ocean bed..
Am I the sun’s sliced line?
The red line,
against the blackened sky?
Am I the redness on your nail?
the chapped uneven surface?
the gaudiness at the tip of your finger..
Am I the redness in your eye?
The only evidence of your last tear
the unmasked face of your age-old scar?
Am I the redness?
Monday, January 21, 2008
Am I the redness?
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Jui Chitre Deshmukh
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5 comments:
"I envy u here...."
Honestly I have more reasons to be envious....just that Im not yet red.
damn you..;)
does redness convey a specific meaning here, jui??
Hmmmm Gooooooooood stuff!!!!
"Am I the redness in your eye?
The only evidence of your last tear
the unmasked face of your age-old scar?"....tooooo good!!!!!
@ revathi
thanks..kid..:)
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