where you end, I begin
insane thoughts
they call it a sin
hazy dots
million plots
where you end, I begin
Monday, November 05, 2007
where you end, I begin
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Jui Chitre Deshmukh
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4 comments:
Very nice Ms.Jui. But please complete the poem.
Regards-Moin.
Sounds complete in a way. Jui you've really got short impactful down pat!! I admire that about your work.
-Nandita
"you" is what "I" sees reflecting on the void,
"you" becomes the cosmos and "I" the observer- the "you" has the infineon to escape from while it follows the "I" searching for itself
this quest can never be completed for completion is the end and the thought of ending somehting that you could never begin is a sin.
In reality there is neither "YOU"
nor "I", its only the self.
Insanity is the denial of this fact...hazy dots and million plots are the result.
this is what i read in your poem, good work!
where you end, i begin..
beautifull lines.. can fit in many situations...
but ideally in context of "end of ego
and begining of love or divine ..."
what is ur actual interpretation of it?
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